hello this is my first brush, I f...k with this 2h and this is result... Pleas tell me my mistakes and tell me how I could fix them

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wip1:

the middle vent section isn't too bad, but the sides look a little odd
firstly - you need to learn how to use the pen tool - there are a few tutorials kicking about i'm sure, but this will avoid those horrible very square edges to the left of the car, and also help avoid the jagged edge along the bottom of the vent

you may also want to consider some styling, as it looks very bland, its just a big mass of paint, with no vents but the main key is the details - little shadows and reflections - if you look at the base they are all over the front end, its not just one colour, and this is what makes your chop look kinda tooney.. but hey, its a first try - you can only improve so keep on practising

omg this is not close finish that bumper... just this in middie is finish and requires a little work ...everything else on the bumper is not nearly finished...tnx for the coment

and this is only shape...