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Post edited January 18, 2010 at 10:42:42 PM by TraceurKing
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Very helpful comments here...
In my opinion, the background fits well and the brush of the body is well done.
Only the uper part (around the windows) looks too flat.
And you definitely have to make a clearer border around the taillights.
Furthermore, the windows are just flat and the edges are very irregular.
However, the basics seem to be given, so keep it up.
You know you wanna click it!
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+1 with closed, cmon guys he wont improve with just :/ very bad when people do that, anyway, nice attempt, closed said it all first, im just gonna add you should maybe do a white car to practice the brushing as there arent as many reflections to try and make, just keep working and practicing what the helpfull coments tell you.
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i think i kinda understand what they mean , i'm not sure so im not shouting here but it looks kinda familiair thats all
if im wrong sorry :-d
but no need to post stupid smily's here and be all negative :-q
Post edited January 20, 2010 at 01:22:08 AM by rich
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I understand the window refs as means you don't need to find an interior. I suppose it could work if you had the mirror window tint, however the windows are missing the rubbing seals at the edges. Some parts it looks good, like the far side of the rear bumper as you have got the highlights bright enough though for the most part there isn't enough colour variation or birght enough highlights. This is a small image and not good quality but it shows what I mean http://www.powervehicles.com/dwpics/g_corp/12.jpg If you look where there is sky reflections the red is more pink/purple and over the rear spoiler and front wing the reflections become strong enough to become almost white.

Overall though, I would say your on the right track, The selections look good, the bg fits well and the refs all look in the right place. Keep going and hope to see some more chops from you :)
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Tanks For the Comm. And If Anyone Of You Can Help me To Make Ref. on a Brush ...
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Familiar yes, because several people have used this base. I don't think anyone should be judged for that, a handful of people chopped the green mazda not too long after Jack did his. :P

Anyway beyond that...it's nice to have at least a little comment about what you are trying when you post your work...not always necessary, but it helps occasionally. If this was your first try at a full brush, I would have to say that you should choose a better base. Use a base that includes the complete car, so you are not guessing at what is and isn't supposed to be there and you will have shadows/highlights to reference. I mention this because your car is missing window edges, and a front marker light.

As for your attempt, it seems as though you have many of the basics down, the shades you used for the red flow very nicely. Your reflections are very strong where the windows are supposed to be, there should at very least be the slight outlines of an interior. Lastly, the lighting highlights (random dots on the body lines) seem a little too random, as if they come from multiple indoor lights rather than a single outside lightsource.

I do think you did well finding a bg that matches the cars perspective...the ground shadow is a little too crisp, but I could see the car actually sitting on that street.

Very good attempt, I would say next time try a base that is more complete to start with, and try and look at other cars and how they reflect the light in a setting similar to the one you are working with. Keep at it :-d
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