New Artist Ferrari F50
Happy to find a community like this! Is there any other websites or pages you like to use for even more community? Anyways, check out my profile chops and here is a F50 of mine.
Global Rank: 0th (7379pts)
Reg: Sep, 2009
Lithuania
Great start, and welcome to autemo !
i really like the color, style and the atmosphere
Smokes and side pipes add really nice touch to whole chop. But there is some minor flaws:
Wheels are in reaaly bad quality. pixelated, noisy and blury at the same time
Also, you NEVER put same wheel on back and front. Looks unrealistic and cheap
you left jagged edges on windshield and better next time put some black or dark grey "stroke patch" on jagged edges. Your brushwork are not bad, but you still need to learn about reflections, because some parts looks kinda toony. And whole car reflection on the ground looks bad. Car doesnt reflect like that better make some small budles with small reflections, not the whole car. Or check some tutorials about that on youtube.
overall not bad start, you have good style, and as a beginner you know how to do things, only thing you need to do now - work on quality, better do small jobs, but in top quality and detail, than making huge projects with hundreds of small mistakes
keep it up
i really like the color, style and the atmosphere
Smokes and side pipes add really nice touch to whole chop. But there is some minor flaws:Wheels are in reaaly bad quality. pixelated, noisy and blury at the same time
Also, you NEVER put same wheel on back and front. Looks unrealistic and cheap you left jagged edges on windshield and better next time put some black or dark grey "stroke patch" on jagged edges. Your brushwork are not bad, but you still need to learn about reflections, because some parts looks kinda toony. And whole car reflection on the ground looks bad. Car doesnt reflect like that
better make some small budles with small reflections, not the whole car. Or check some tutorials about that on youtube.overall not bad start, you have good style, and as a beginner you know how to do things, only thing you need to do now - work on quality, better do small jobs, but in top quality and detail, than making huge projects with hundreds of small mistakes
keep it up
Global Rank: 0th (7328pts)
Reg: Jan, 2015
Germany
Global Rank: 0th (9086pts)
Reg: Jul, 2017
Norway
Welcome to Autemo! Nice to see a new face here.
Pretty much this. A good tip if you have to use the same rim in the front and rear especially in this case is to just copy the rim and move it in so that the rim looks wider/deeper.
I'm liking your work so far and I'm looking forward to your next chop. Keep it up!
double a wrote:
Great start, and welcome to autemo !
i really like the color, style and the atmosphere Smokes and side pipes add really nice touch to whole chop. But there is some minor flaws:
Wheels are in reaaly bad quality. pixelated, noisy and blury at the same time Also, you NEVER put same wheel on back and front. Looks unrealistic and cheap
you left jagged edges on windshield and better next time put some black or dark grey "stroke patch" on jagged edges. Your brushwork are not bad, but you still need to learn about reflections, because some parts looks kinda toony. And whole car reflection on the ground looks bad. Car doesnt reflect like that better make some small budles with small reflections, not the whole car. Or check some tutorials about that on youtube.
overall not bad start, you have good style, and as a beginner you know how to do things, only thing you need to do now - work on quality, better do small jobs, but in top quality and detail, than making huge projects with hundreds of small mistakes
keep it up
i really like the color, style and the atmosphere
Smokes and side pipes add really nice touch to whole chop. But there is some minor flaws:Wheels are in reaaly bad quality. pixelated, noisy and blury at the same time
Also, you NEVER put same wheel on back and front. Looks unrealistic and cheap you left jagged edges on windshield and better next time put some black or dark grey "stroke patch" on jagged edges. Your brushwork are not bad, but you still need to learn about reflections, because some parts looks kinda toony. And whole car reflection on the ground looks bad. Car doesnt reflect like that
better make some small budles with small reflections, not the whole car. Or check some tutorials about that on youtube.overall not bad start, you have good style, and as a beginner you know how to do things, only thing you need to do now - work on quality, better do small jobs, but in top quality and detail, than making huge projects with hundreds of small mistakes
keep it up
Pretty much this. A good tip if you have to use the same rim in the front and rear especially in this case is to just copy the rim and move it in so that the rim looks wider/deeper.
I'm liking your work so far and I'm looking forward to your next chop. Keep it up!
Previously known as X-Raited Creations
Global Rank: 0th (8353pts)
Reg: Jul, 2015
South Africa
Global Rank: 0th (694pts)
Reg: Jul, 2017
Canada
Thanks everyone! I never discuss my art with anyone, the constructive criticism is amazing. Finding this place will definitely make me improve and start doing some longer project chops to a higher standard. I usually try to start - finish in one sitting, which doesn't cut it with my skill level if I compare to the work on here!