Mazda-2-Door :: DubBoy

Hey,
Finished my latest WIP.
Mazda 2 door set up as a weekend track car as well as a daily, tough getting over speedbumps.
I tried to raise the car after brushing over 30 layers and failed as other layers got in the way so i could not extend the body kit.

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Thanks, please comment.
DubBoy
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i don't know how to say it but i try.. lol
car looks really nice and i like it..
only thing i can point at are the seats, imo they should be put a bit more near to the end of the door..
rest is fine :D i like the style..

cheers Dave
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Thanks mate.
I totally agree with you, The donor kind of ran out so that was a risk i had to take. Maybe if i filled the area with something else it might not look so awkward.
thanks again,
DubBoy
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well it came out awsome ...
and i think its soo close to pro or can just be pro

i do want to say you need to spend more time in the end cleaning up stuff and making sure all is blended
i'll explain
you spend loads of time on the design , brush , body and it all looks awsome but the final perfection is as important and more simple to get right the the rest of the work

just leave the chop for a day the look at it close like for 5 minutes zoom in and out
because then you will find stuff i mean .and fixing it is then simple

a few examples of flaws that are there and i saw them right away and are easy to fix

1. the rear wheel / tyre is floating the wheel needs to come down a bit so its on the shadow
2. the seats look awsome but the left one is in front of the rear vieuw mirror , you forgot to cut that out or replace the rear vieuw mirror , so in a way you now have something that cant be the seat cant be in front of the rear vieuw mirror
3. looking inside (interiour) i can see you rebrushed the rear bottom rear window line
that looks great but looking through the side window it does not continue and there the line is way lower
4. last thing this might sound as whining a bit on the high res some outlines could be a tad better at the rear and at the rear spoiler there is a slight white line / spots

now i'm only saying this because you have great potential and these flaws are stuff you can get right with your chopskills , its just a case of when the chop is finished taking the time to find them and correct them
on a wip people usually dont see them because its in progress and only shows real good on a hr

so this is actually ment sooo good towards you and i hope this helps you on your next chop :)

skills are great , design is great

so dont hget me wrong its a very cool and awsome looking chop , you just have reached a level now for me that makes this stuff important also

grts rich
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quite liked this chop,rich pointed out the mistakes ;)

but I liked the kit and wheels. Understood the overall idea,keep it up :-d
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rich wrote:
well it came out awsome ...
and i think its soo close to pro or can just be pro

i do want to say you need to spend more time in the end cleaning up stuff and making sure all is blended
i'll explain
you spend loads of time on the design , brush , body and it all looks awsome but the final perfection is as important and more simple to get right the the rest of the work

just leave the chop for a day the look at it close like for 5 minutes zoom in and out
because then you will find stuff i mean .and fixing it is then simple

a few examples of flaws that are there and i saw them right away and are easy to fix

1. the rear wheel / tyre is floating the wheel needs to come down a bit so its on the shadow
2. the seats look awsome but the left one is in front of the rear vieuw mirror , you forgot to cut that out or replace the rear vieuw mirror , so in a way you now have something that cant be the seat cant be in front of the rear vieuw mirror
3. looking inside (interiour) i can see you rebrushed the rear bottom rear window line
that looks great but looking through the side window it does not continue and there the line is way lower
4. last thing this might sound as whining a bit on the high res some outlines could be a tad better at the rear and at the rear spoiler there is a slight white line / spots

now i'm only saying this because you have great potential and these flaws are stuff you can get right with your chopskills , its just a case of when the chop is finished taking the time to find them and correct them
on a wip people usually dont see them because its in progress and only shows real good on a hr

so this is actually ment sooo good towards you and i hope this helps you on your next chop :)

skills are great , design is great

so dont hget me wrong its a very cool and awsome looking chop , you just have reached a level now for me that makes this stuff important also

grts rich

I LOVE COMMENTS LIKE THESE :D
I agree with you entirely and appreciate your comment.
Very silly mistakes i made that i will try to improve in my next chop.

Thanks again,
DubBoy
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any more comments guys?
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