BMW E30

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strange idea for a pickup but still cool chop, really like it!

dunno what to write more tbh, it stands out of the bg a little, maybe some brightness adjustments would make it fit better.
I agree with Cudak
And maybe the car is little to big for the background compared with the building behind it.
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nice man. I think its cause of shadow which could be better for bg
and not sure with pickup looks bit flat? maybe need some little stuff what we can see
more the left and window just little...
idea and whole work is rly cool!
Overall not bad, interesting idea and the second(black) set of wheels is awesome :D

As for the things I see:

-The light bar is a bit off. The left side should go a bit down or the right a bit up
-The barrels of the wheels have a white-ish reflection from the spokes in the second picture(shouldn't be, since the spokes are black)
-The front tire seems cut by the fender at the top(it's too much even if for bags), a little less shadow on it would be better(this is just on the second pic, black wheels)
-On the passenger side, you left the door pillar and the B pillar, while on the drivers side, you cut the B pillar
-The overfenders could be better fitted, especially the front one and the little canards could use some shadow
-The pod filter is a bit small and too much shadow is on it
-The passenger side brake duct(vent next to the oil cooler) looks a bit strange and not the same as the drivers side one
-The car is too bright for the bg, bg has more contrast

I have no intention of being an ass, and some of the above things could be wrong, but that's what I see :)
And the second one looks better in my opinion :D
Very useful tips guys, thank you :-d
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