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^#1 Posted September 20, 2016 at 06:23:21 PM

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^#2 Posted September 20, 2016 at 06:27:41 PM

bg looks good.
don't forget work on shadow and reflec. on ground

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^#3 Posted September 20, 2016 at 06:52:24 PM

What to do with the shadow and reflec. on the ground?

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^#4 Posted September 20, 2016 at 06:55:44 PM

car and wheels bit to bright.
and shadow under car is not perfect atm
maybe if wheels darker shadow is ok.
and ground is wet so u need to edit the base reflec.
maybe with little red and some small edits with your rims

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^#5 Posted September 21, 2016 at 07:45:43 PM

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^#6 Posted September 21, 2016 at 07:50:29 PM

the wheels are too light compared to the shadow and overall contrast of the whole picture, play with the curves to get them to be the same tone as the rest of the picture

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^#7 Posted September 21, 2016 at 08:46:23 PM

much better so far bit to bright whole car and wheels need little darken too.
but much better then before.

reflections on ground need more work they need to be more parellel with car.
like veer did
http://www.autemo.com/forums/?t=21679

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^#8 Posted September 22, 2016 at 12:20:18 AM

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