Tell me the mistakes that i made pls Novel Comp

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Here is my chop, can u tell me the mistakes i made? I want to improve my tenic please. Thanks
Sorry for my english
The paint is too dark
Need more highlight
The legt side need more orange light Parts and the right side More blue Parts
But the idea is awesome
Keep it up mate
Nice work on the styling. The new parts are also fitted well; I see no mistakes in perspective and scale.

Like Tunerstylz above me mentioned, the lighting is the only thing which brings the overall look down.

The camera blur on the front of the car is way too strong as well. It wouldn't make any sense framing a whole car in quarter view into the frame and have such shallow depth of field.
I agree with the above comments.
Just a few other small things:

1) The spoiler needs to be further right >> (just a little bit). If you line up the struts with the back of the car, you'll notice that they're too far left

2) Blur around the rear lights - I know you've tried to turn the lights on, but you've kind of added a dull yellow blur. They should be much much brighter, with lots of white to get the effect of being turned on.

Other than that it's actually a really good chop, with lots of good stuff :D
Well done :-d I wish you luck in the competition
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hey guys, i just changed all that you say... But i was doing the rear lights... and i have problems for decide what kind of lights fit better with the car... There are all with brush..

Opcion 1
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Opcion 2
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Opcion 3
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Opcion 4
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of the all the number 3
the rest doesn't Look good
An other question, japanese plate or spanish?
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the last ;)
Tunerstylz wrote:
the last ;)

I think the same hahaha
Sorry for my english
I like option one
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