Saxo on Bags.

Here i have a Saxo where i have rebrushed parts of the body. I've changed the BG and there are lot's of reflection and in general; issues... please help?

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thanks,
DubBoy
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Looks clean, but if its on bags those wheels need to tuck when its laid out. Should see some negative camber and grow those things half again as big as they are. :-d Everything else is looking pretty sweet.
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water reflections are looking sweet indeed. You need to make the wheels much bigger ;)
wheels better?? still need some help with other buts such as window refs.
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legendary base xD

wheels look great but on the rear one theres still a white edge
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Kofelstofel wrote:
legendary base xD

wheels look great but on the rear one theres still a white edge

that's from the tyre reflection but i could get rid of it easy.
oh and thanks Goncas for the base :-d
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worked on the fb some more... Still doesn't look 100% right, help?

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Hey, I like the style of the wheels. Thats why i wanted to help you. Made the back wheel a bit better. Couldn't stop so did a few more thing, also the backwindow reflection. Maybe it can help you out ;)

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Best regards,

Johan
At the minute, it seems like the rear wheel isn't big enough and should be tucked under the arch with some aggressive negative camber, same with the front wheel. The thing that throw the whole picture off is the rear wheel seems to be facing us more than the front which looking at the perspective, would be impossible. This would be solved by stretching the rear wheel upwards as i said, and after youve done that make both wheels bigger but kept in proportion with each other. THEN skew them to fit under the arch and so shadow work and so forth. Don't forget to add any new changes with the reflection on the floor too ^^ The reflection has been done nicely as Mark said but i feel it could use something more. Maybe slight ripples, the water looks way too flat and clean atm.
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thanks looks dope!!!! will do, thanks again it is a major improvement :D
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