Nice chop m8
IMO
- there is something wierd about the whole roof line
- some bad selections around the front arch
- wheels are a bit bllury
- whole chop looks a lot darker compared to the bg car (yeagh that porsche is silver but color is a lot brighter than the chop)
- and there is that litle white thing on left end of the rear bumper

But thats all just my opinion, no hard feelings m8 and good luck in round 2

Edit:
imo whole cho should be just like your 9 - th wip in wip image.
Post edited March 25, 2013 at 05:14:46 AM by Gile

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Thank you for your feedbacks mate.
i've tried to add a sunroof , and i know the front arch is not well done , and that little white thing is a rock ..if you could just check on the original bg..i did not notice that :/
i was hesitating about this bg as its too bright :(

Thank you and Good luck to you too :cool:
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Nice black matte finish..but isn't it too dark for that bg?
Very daring having put these red rims on black matte.
Black matte finish could be improved ;)

Quite clean chop though ..well done :-d
Post edited March 25, 2013 at 08:25:43 AM by Brian
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Thanks, i guess yes..its too bright :(
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I'd be tempted to say this is getting on towards pro standard of working, as are some of your other chops tbh :)

This is one of my favourite of yours yet, and one of the coolest entries I've seen this round so far
Matte paint is extremely hard to get right without it looking toony, and I think in this case you've done a really good job - it's actually very convincing, especially given how well it matches up with the backdrop
The rim choice is good too, and there's not much I can fault - perhaps the tyres are a little thin, and there seems to be a strange reflection on the top right of the front window

Other than that super stuff! Keep it up :-d
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Thank you ATC , your critics are always useful for me.

Indeed, very tough and hard to realize a black matte finish,but i was on for a camouflaged style, but finally liked the back matte finish. Gave my best..and researched on black matte cars , on how light looked like on them. I mus say am quite satisfied with the results, but
could however been better if i had give much more. i'm still in doubt concerning the bg :/

As for the rims, was checking my Facebook home page when i came across the Red Golf with flicker links..risked these reds rims on black matte.

Will work harder for the Pro Tuner level ;)

Thank you again mate :)
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Very nice brush. It's so cool.

But I think: the back lights are ugly covered. Why you don't put on the car the original highlights whith a dark effect?

The side vent's high area is toon, because there's a too dark and hard shadow, under the rib...
Post edited March 29, 2013 at 12:29:08 AM by Car Passion
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Nice brush, but I don't like the back lights, and the exhausts are 2d for me. :)
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