hey guys i got abit bored with the mustang and came up with this. fb is colour coded by brush
hopefully getting a little bit closer to inter C+C welcome. Enjoy


original
http://www.netcarshow.com/volkswagen/2005-fox_1.4/800x600/wallpaper_07.htm

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Very clean work.
Only the rear bumper has the wrong color partly.
Cool rims and background.
Nice that you took the topic of cancer. But there´s one "m" missing in the url on the right.

thanks dude anyone else on this? 40 views one comment :O

Can someone else please comment.

Nice , clean work

It's clean work, with some good pieces, but with a lot that can be improved. We can start with the windows. They are way to transperent. What you should have done would be to cut out the real windows, and then brushed with a dark brush on the layer beneath the car, then lowered the opacity untill the color of the windows were somewhat the same as the passenger chair.

Another issue is the darker areas in the rims, between the spokes. It's more grey then the dark area around the tyre. These are suposed to be the same color, so the rim needs more contrast untill the dark area between the spokes is almost black.

There are some stuff you could have done to the paint as well to make it fit better with the bg, like adding refs and tweaking the color towards the blue spectrum. But these are things you learn by chopping So just keep at it and you will learn!

Cheers!

Thanks dude really appreicated.

not bad , but the bg looks grainy , the pink ... i'd say the whole car looks a bit light like it needs more contrast
also if that was fixed playing with some colorhue could really bring it to life
i like the idea of the cancer support and the ribbon , the decal on the side just looks to unrealistic i'm affriad

that are the main issues , not saying it's bad off-course