hi

this my latest chop . all brushed .
i think the windows look funny. what do you think?

Really interesting chop. I somewhat like the style, it looks oldschool somehow. The lines and stance and everything reminds me of an old prosche, but with modern traiths with that fb and ss. Not quite sure what type of style you were aiming for here, cause like I said the overall car looks quite clean, with an agressive front, and of course the rollcage. But for me it doesn't fit with the image style sort of speak. As I mentioned it feels oldschool, not race. Could be a personal thing, but I feel it conflicts a little.

The brush is really good in places, and really not good in others Some obvious things to start with would be the wheelarches which are not round. This is quite tricky some times even with the pentool, but then instead you can use the circular path tool! It's right below the Text tool in the workpalette. Draw a cirlepath, then transform it untill it looks nice, and then cutout or use it as a part of a larger path and make the selection and brush. This is more applicable for your future work of course But could be used here as well as mentioned above.

Also there are some perspective issues. The car is sitting rather strangly on the bg. Can't quite put my finger on it, but looks like the ground is sloaping more then car. There is also an issue with the fb. The center hole looks like it's to far to the left, and it also looks like the hold is bigger on the cars right side then the left, when it in reality should be the other way around since the right side is further away then the left.

You asked what was wrong with the windows, and I think the main issue is the color. You have a quite desaturated bg, almost black and white, but still you have blue windows? How is that? What blue are they reflecting that make them look like that? If there had been a blue sky it had been perfect, but now you have grey. There is an easy fix though Select your interior layer together with your windows, press CTRL + U, then pull the middle one (guess it Saturation in english) down to zero and you should look much better

So overall nice brushing, but there are some perspective and color issues. As well as conflicting styling, but overall it's good. Keep practicing the brushing and the rest will come naturally with experience

Cheers!

thnx Algeroth for the comment

i wanted a simple and a racey design

and for the bg . it was a try of making a bg myself taking an asphalt pic and a clouds pic and putting them together thats why you might find it weird

Nice chop, but I don`t like the rims (they are too small imo), and maybe u try to put some coloured reflections?

looks old skool indeed
Some parts look smudged and it looks too grey imo.

The windows are great.
But there is something missing around the headlights and the whole car (except the windows) looks a bit toony.
I like the rims, but because the bg has the wrong perspective, you were forced to make the rear one wuite small.

thnx for the comments m8s

damm that is hot

cool chop, good attempt on brushing, i agree with algeroth

Nice brushing like the style of it, but i do agree with that it looks smudged. agree with everyting that Algeroth said.