hi

this is a chop i made three months ago . didnt post here so i thought i would now

mistakes found so far : rain drops to big - rear arch - neons to bright

ori:


chop:


c&c pls

A really cool looking chop this! The style is awesome! I really like the design of the whole car. The fb design works really well with the side of the car, and the black widebody fenders look really cool. The two colorcombo between black and green in perfect harmony. Maybe the mirrors should have been black as well, but other then that it's a perfect mix. Not to fond of the carbon fiber though, it should have been more black so that they were more or less colorcoded to the fenders and rims so that you would have had the same colors all over. That had made it look more consistent and though through.

The damage on the fb and ss is decent, but still looks quite fake. The damage doesn't quite make sense sort of. On the ss for instance, what did this guy hit in order to get more damage further in on the ss then in the front of it? hehe.

I also like the rims, fit perfectly with the style of the chop. The black vs the green is somewhat original, and I like the fact that you kept the calipers yellow. Makes the rims really pop.

The neon light looks really nice as well. You should have added a bit more light up the door though, but it looks nice.

I don't like the rain though... The car is moving quite quickly, but the rain is standing still. You should have added motionblur to all of it to add speed to the picture. Now you have a moving car standing still... which doesn't quite make sense. Hehe. But the rain is nicely done and the overall scene looks cool. Might have wanted to add a ref of the car in the asphalt to show that it's wet though?

Very nice chop, and I'm looking forward to your next one!
Cheers!

Your other chops are more or less upper intermediate, that here belongs into new choppers imo, sry.
The rear rim is a catastrophe. It´s too big and heavily off.
The way the front wheels steers, the car will crash into the guardrail.
The neon is not realistic. You would not see it that bright on day, even with rain.
The light spots are much too close to the car, otherwise they are good.
The rain does not look good. It should go down in a straight line more or less, there´s no storm in the world that would let the rain change direction every few centimetres. Then, you do not see it on the car and it just looks like a filter.
The upper housing in the side looks good, the lower one is a bit toony.
The front fits well, but what has happended in front of the wheel? I guess it should be damage, but it does not look real. You need some scratches around it.
The numberplate is a nice idea, as well as the camera (very funny). The camera needs a better shadow, though.
Apart from the damage (see problem above) the sideskirt looks very nice.
The grey hood looks good.
The "Holden SS" letters do not fit in the perspective.
The eyelids are ok, just a bit toony.
The 36 on the window looks very good.

Edit: Oops, almost every line begins with "the". However, doesn´t matter.

very cool , but the rain cant convince me ....
some things def. could be better angled etc.
as whole really nod bad

thnx for the comments