Yes! That's more like it
You're getting the hang of this lighting thing now - good clean sharp reflections
The rear arch is particularly good.
You may even consider lightening those highlights even more
This'll make it look even shinier.
Another pointer - you see that dark colour beneath teh fold running along the side of the body? Make areas lower on the body work kind of fade into that colour - this will give it a rich shiny feeling
But so far so good - cool styling and nice brushing
Keep us posted