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spoiler better?
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Not bad your getting better dude!!
but:

-The spoiler extends too far right, so it's off.
-The tyres are darker then the shadow, so maybe darken the whole shadow area abit, with burn tool
-And the area next to the steering wheel/ the A pillar is too bright. darken it abit.

and nice work :-d
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IMO,you should not put that spoiler,it looks bad for a convertible!
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I'll get right on it!
i actually like the spoiler.
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i particularly like the wheels and the paintwork.
talking about the rest i quote what Joseph said.
and i could add that imo background is a bit off.
rest is nice. keep up mate. ;)
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Ok, changed all suggested:
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I CBF doing reflections of lights (Background) , because I don't know how mainly.

PS. has anybody noticed the Number Plate?
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Post edited September 08, 2010 at 08:36:33 PM by Sarge
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Looks pretty cool. I think the hood looks way too bright now, so I'd try to darken that a bit. The hood as well as other parts of the body need some reflections of the new background. For example you could try to put some reflections of those windows on the ceiling of the warehouse.

Otherwise it's really nice, and I'm sure if you fix some of those things I suggested you could move up to inter ;)
puszka321 wrote:
please video xD
MK211 wrote:
I really like the nos coming out of the rims
Sarge, I created a little drawing to show you the two main areas I think you need to sort to be sure of getting inter :-d


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Post edited September 08, 2010 at 09:17:13 PM by Sarge
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