Honda Accord

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Post edited March 28, 2017 at 01:38:57 AM by Elektro Design
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Here is the thing ! never ! and i mean never put a car thats outside in an inside background unless you rebrushed it, another thing is your shadow, its sooo light, the car is pretty low, lower than the base so shadow should be darker and more visible and a bit sharper as well, now i know those wheels, i use them myself and they are from an evo in a pit, for one, car is too low and cannot turn and second front lip is too dark and doesn't match the car brightness, same goes for the wheels, few things you could do to make this work is put the car on an outside bg or the original bg, make the wheels and front lip lighter, make the shadow darker, raise the car a bit to tyre height even and make the vents in the front bumper, might put a grill on it or some exposed parts..but keep practicing, no hard feelings :-d
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nice work. u forget change bg in windows or its not perfect with the pilaars and all.
kit and wheels are nice. but shadow directly under car need be darker.
and ya point like veer said from changing outdoor and indoor.
kit looks cool!
Veer and B said all there has to be said!

Changing from an inside bg to an outside bg is dangerous unless you have the skill and time to rebrush all the reflections to make the car fit perfectly! The wheels aren't the best features of the chop either, they lack the contrast of the car and bg and both front and rear cut into the fenders! if the windows are this dark they should act like mirrors and reflect everything around them (another issue with such a drastic bg change!!) The whole car is missing the contrast of the new bg, also the front spoiler you pasted on the car has different lighting to the car and the bg! these are little details that can be easily fixed!

More time and concentration next time and it'll be nice!
my bro i give you one vote to motivate you cause you have feelings and you diserve 10.000 chances to prove that you can do better, here goes my vote for you cause i want you be motivaded my bro

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There is no point on having a points system if we have that attitude Nissan Boy...

its like giving the fat kid a medal in the sprint race just for participating...

if your point is to motivate him than how he supposed to be better when you give him max point??
to motivate him to do better works and be focus
i belive he has potencial to be better and better matt
I agree with Matt guys, if his chop is worth a 6 or 7, don't u think it would motivate him more to try and get better so then he can get an 8 or 9, and then work his way up to the big 10, if we keep giving everyone 10, it means there is no room for improvement, and in my opinion giving someone a 10 means it's pretty much a perfect chop and belongs in the elite section, maybe pro tuners at the least, but that's my opinion.

This chop is far from a 10, it's not a bad chop, but for the amount of mods done and how they're executed, I think it wud be more along the lines of a 6, I'm not putting the guy down but if u guys want to get better u need to take this as constructive criticism and use it to get better, I would imagine that's why a points system was designed in the first place.

Anyway apart from that, if u fix the errors and spend more time on the chop, I'm sure it will be 10 times better 👍🏼
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The pointing system was talked about a couple of times so far and nothing has changed. I agree it's kinda pointless giving a 10 for every work and if you want to motivate someone, you should give them a more realistic grade. If you can't, it's better off not giving a grade at all.

It's the same with the comments, they should be more helpful, not just saying "great work", because if you point out a flaw, like matt, Veer and F355 did here, you're actually giving a note to someone to try and correct it in the future. Especially since there's a lot of novice artist here, who could get better faster(myself included) if there was actual feedback. I'm not pointing fingers at anyone, since I don't comment that often, but I try to be helpful when I do. :)

I know this is the wrong place for this kind of comment, but I was just continuing on F355's and matt's posts.

As for the chop, everyone has said what's good and what's not, so I won't add to that. :)
Veer and B said all there has to be said!

Keep it up
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