Range Rover Sport [dirty, explicit]

Here is my Range Rover Sport I made for a German competition with the topic "Great Britain" (that´s why there´s this cup of tea).
I made the 7th place of 16 participants.
I do not have the time to convert it for the competition here on autemo.
Mods are obvious, I think.

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The idea I like but the reflection in the water does not seem real, while the car does not merge in this new bg.
Haha, love the idea of this! Looks awesome! :) There are some issues but we'll get to them later.

First of the design of the car. You havn't done a whole lot to the actual car, but what you have done looks great! :) Really works well with the whole offroad feel of the car. The bars on the headlights feel so right, and overall the chop looks cool! :)

There are some quality issues however, the two primary things have been mentioned above, meainly that the car doesn't quite fit the background and the reflection. First of the reflection looks quite good in the sense that the car is reflected straight down, or almost anways, I can buy that. But! There are waves, even though they are small, on the water, and therefore there should be some on the reflection as well. Using the filter/distort/wave might work. The second issue also mentioned above is that the car doesn't quite fit in the bg. This is trickier, cause it's not an easy scene to work with. My best guess would be to add some more vegetation refelctions on the side, similar to the ones in the window, but they should have a quite low saturation so they become more grey.

Overall I love this chop! Very original, and gave me a laugh. The quality drags it down a little, but overall it's just great! :) Keep at it!

Cheers!
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well the car kinda looks tooned (?)
i like the idea's but the bg with the green kinda really looks low res.. maybe you should have opted to do everything in the style of the car and called it a mudtoon or something like that
the way the mud is around the car doenst really say it's actually in there ..should have gotten more work to get the impression the car actually is part of the mud surface
all sounds pretty harsh :( but it's ment well m8 :-d
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basically ill talk through howto make the car fit the bgs better

the mud on the ground, goes more blue tones as it moves to the back of the car, this must reflect in the mud marks on the parts of the car where you have applied it

also take some donor bits of mud from the ground and using warp them to fit the shape of the car

also take some bush refs to apply to the paint areas, if you need any help with this hit me up!
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Thanks for all your helpful comments.
This week, I wont have time for an update till Saturday, but then I´ll try to improve the faults you mentioned.
@rich: I did not want to make a toon, but I have to admit that especially the motorhood looks toony.
I still have to practise brushing, although I´m already quite satisfied with it in this case.
The background is not low res, but low quality (was 1600x1200). I did not think it was that obvious, I only saw it on the car that originally stood there.
Post edited December 08, 2009 at 06:32:34 AM by Closed 24-7
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