Not really sure what to say on it. There's too many mistakes in the wip.
People told you countless time before, try to do small changes first, instead of doing all the brush and crazy stuffs.
You didn't listen at all.
One of the most basic thing you should master before going any further, making selections. The selection on your chop is really really damn bad. And you didn't care about the image quality too.
Wanted to ask, what program are you using? If you used paint, then I can understand.
If you can't understand what I'm saying, then I guess you should at least learn to understand basic English before asking for comments in this forum.