Looks really great! The brushing is awesome and the details are amazing.
There are a few parts of the car bothering me at the moment. First of all is the shadow. It seems too dark and too sharp. I think it needs to be a bit softer and just slightly lighter than its current colour to look more realistic. Background should also be visible just right of the rear wheel, under the side skirt.
To me the right side of the front bumper (near the edge) seems a bit toony. I'm not sure what sort of highlight thingy you've got going on there but it looks weird to me and doesn't really make sense for matte paint. The orange colour tones (maybe still from the old bg?) on it don't make sense to me either. I think you should just smooth it over and it'll look better - possibly.
The flat parts of the arches (those round circular darker parts) look a bit odd too. In some areas I don't think you need to define these parts at all and just smooth them into the body work - I think that'd look a lot cleaner and be more realistic. The rear arch looks pretty good, but it's mainly the front arch where you have a sharp line just right of the front wheel. Smooth this just a bit into the front bumper to get rid of that huge contrast in brightness and it'll look a lot better imo.
That front lip looks weird to me too. It just looks strange, almost like someone stuck a piece of cardboard onto the front bumper (brings to mind Nicklas' cardboard bodykitted Punto
). Give it some shadow and make it a little darker than what it is, sort of like the side skirt, because at the moment it sticks out like a sore thumb
Now I know half of those things you probably would have fixed before finishing (like the shadow and the possibly those arches) but I thought I'd just bring your attention to it, incase you forgot. This is just my opinion, but fix up those little things and I think this chop will be more even more epic! Can't wait to see it all finished in its glory!
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puszka321 wrote:
please video
MK211 wrote:
I really like the nos coming out of the rims