cituning decal on the hood ????

Looks really nice so far! love the rims! details are very good, nice progress! I think the logo looks nice, I would like too see a orange "stripe" from the hood and over the roof, and "cut" out the "cituning" logo out of the orange stripe, just a tought, guess it would look better like this but would be nice too see how that would look also.

Keep it up!

thnx i was doing some sort of double stripe where the logo is but i got tyred of the ebnds and perpspective , will try some sort of aditional stripe where the logo is 4 sure

who are ci tuning

Sounds good! lookin forward to the next update!

hi gazza cituning is a tuningcompany that tunes citroens original its a belgium / france company
exist for ages back in the day they mnade kits for the citroen ax even

and fishen > i first strarted some arches

still very rough and the first base brush of the shape , needs cleaning up and adding of highlights

looks good for now,I like those wheels!!! after you finish this,could you send me a donor of rims?

I`ll be watching this w.i.p

Looks really nice with arches! If you havent made the rims from many donors or something could I also have them ?
keep it up!

Been watching this since the beginning, and I like it. To bad the storyline in the bg ended though. Very entertaining. Which is awesome with your threads. Since you update so often it's like following you there, right in the moment. Which I personally enjoy in times when I don't have the time to chop myself. Big creds for that mate!

I'd better comment the chop as well, whilst I'm here I like what you have done so far, but I have a few concerns. I say concerns, cause you are better at this type of chopping than me, so I won't say that they are faults

My first concern is the angle of the front wheel. Looks like it has some negative camber in this angle. I have thought about it back and forth and I think there are two solutions. The first is to tilt the wheel to the right, OR!, to move it forward a bit. I am less concerned now with the flared wheelarches than I was before, but still...

Second of is the hood. My concern is that the colorchange (hrm, was there one? ) has made it a bit saturated. The ref from the sky looks all broken up on the cars left side. Some lay hands rebrush there, with a touch of blue hue would do miracles I think.

My third and last concern is the double air-intakes on the right side of the front spoiler. I think the lip, or whatever you wanna call it, at the bottom should be wider across the first hole over to the second to give the spoiler the right depth there. I could be misstaken, as I said these are concerns not faults.

Everything else looks nice. Interesting "concept" sort of. It's even more racey than the sport OEM version, which I guess you use for inspiration since you have the same colorscheme, but still not to extreme to be a tuner. I like the OEM style But you can probably push it further.

Also I would like the story in the bg back! Haha.

Cheers mate!

thnx guys

first of all i want to start about something , i almost never got wheel issues in the past , people never said anything about my wheel positioning

the last 3 chops i did where all weird wheel wise , i just had trounble getting it right

my conclusion is i picked bases in different less safe angles and on all 3 i had a certain problem i never ever had before
its like when i lowered the car the wheels where in the ori position , usually it looks great and i only need to bring them out more , on this one it looked soo weird so i started angeling and changing them
then the problem is i think i get so focussed on the angles you just dont see it anymore and eveytime i get it wrong

i know the wheels are still not good and i just left them for now , also because i'm working on the arches witch can desray the looks again

my idea was to kinda start over , the front wheel i now know has got to have a totally new tyre , betetr proportioned and then replace the rim

the rim kinda looks steered due to the inside lip and the way the outer ring sits so i need to redo it and make it so the front wheel is steered and more of the right side gets behind the bumper and it needs to be further away from the arch and skirt on the left

on the ori the wheel is also very close to the skirt / door side thats maybe why i went wrong


the fun part is i', not a shamed , like said i never had real wheel issues in the past and its more of a chalelnge and drive to get them right

afterall i'm in advanced so i want to get that right

the rest of the body and stuff will be worked on

the bonnet is fun i actually overlayed the same blue as the roof , maybe i can add a bit more obvious blue

thanx for the comments

and well about the story i will see what i can do