iCandi wrote:
Fixed now?

nope

thnx for the kebab xD
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What about now?
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rear wheel is very blurry..
other than that.. great work
take a look also to the rear wheel' arch..
it's a bit serrate (i don't know how to say it in english.. d'oh)..
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No problem man ^^ I get ya.
The wheel is blurry cause i simply printscreen'd the screen and enlarged the rear arch and wheel to make the impression of how it would get.

Thanks for the comment!
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awesome .. not to be a knob but you should listen to peoples opinions mate because normally you dont .. talk to me on msn if you want to talk about it properly ... not ere lol
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Hmm... i did try to do that?
I made all the changes rich told me to do?
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You got some advice before that mate, from Nordic among others.

I still dunno what I think about this chop. Prefer the realistic look, but I think it will turn out nice when it's done :) Nice job there on following Riches advice, really made a differance, and the chop looks tons better :) In any case I'm looking forward to the result! :)

Cheers!
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yh try and add abit more realism to it, also fix that rear arch
i look forward to seeing the result ;)
i meant it to rich, who suggested it should be me helping you
and i stated why i wont ;)
simple as that

well, here is something, but i cant bother to go really accurate and detailed
floor/sky/car, neither of those 3 match together shading/colorwise
building refs, looks like it is some airbrushed painting, more than reflection, because of the way it is formed
brushing overall is messy around edges, and the rearrim looks crooked and lowres
frontbumper is off
the purple in the hood, looks awkward, since it mostly light-blue paint, and there is nothing suggesting where even closely anything close to it should come

i already said almost all of these, and neither have they been fixed, or even listened to when i said them, bit like algeroth already said, which is why i propably wont be interested into writing this or similar again for while
no problem , it's nothing special for me to help i used to do this a lot

i have always put in effort to help in the past (digimods for instance), these days not as much as back in the days but since i got on autemo the drive to help has come back because this community is serious about chopping :-d :-d ..

i mean i can relate to nordic because i have been in that position myself but ... oh well :D :-d
but on the other hand dont feel offended 80% of the people wont really use advice and thats narural , they want to go at it themselfs or just dont see what people mean
now he got demoted and he really see's people saying the same things and is happy with help
i dont know what the deal was off-course but .....

what would really help now imo .. = image adjustments > change color > pick the darkest blue in the picture and downtone the contrast a tiny tiny bit or mabe the colo opacity
then the colors would be a tad more mild and that also looks more realistic

you could also do this after your done brushing on the body ..

also try google and serch for fence > picket fence etc etc and find a good pic with a low fence , then you could place that on the edge of the tarmac between the far bg and front to make the suggestion even stronger the car is on a hill :-d
this bg is perfect for great detailing

also search skid marks and find a good skidmark donor overlay that on the surface (need trying and tweaking) and it looks like the car was having fun there , or some vehicles before this shot was taken ....

here i made the color less saturated and drkened the pic a tad , see how it's more easy to the eye ??

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i would also brush the wells black (no wheels in there) and just search for new wheels (tryres and rims) witch fit perfect , have great quality and already got a good angle ..
then you can work on the shade before the rim comes in ..
Post edited November 06, 2009 at 07:20:05 PM by rich
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