thanks guys!
I would appreciate some constructive criticism, whats missing, whats wrong etc.
I'm pretty stuck in this!
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Amazing mate ;)
that paint needs more colours like yellow for example :-d
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Looking great.

In my opinion the windscreen doesn't look quite right. I think it's a bit transparent looking at the moment.
Here's something I mocked up for you quickly.
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I just added some cloud like reflections to it. The ones you have on there seem a bit flat to me. Hopefully you can understand what I mean by the windscreen being flat :)
puszka321 wrote:
please video xD
MK211 wrote:
I really like the nos coming out of the rims
i totally agree with klaus and the other that commented. :D
rest is great. keep up mate. :)
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Many thanks Klaus, 10x better with this wind screen! will see what I can do and I will add some more color into the hood paint!
Then I'm thinking of making same vent hole on left side of the hood and design a rear wing! Then its near end!
I wrote this long comment earlier, but then the computer I was sitting at had a total meltdown so it failed miserably.

I really like this chop, never been much of a fan of the s2000, but with your design really lifts the overall feel of the car. The one thing I still don't like is the roof. I know that's what the S2000 hard-top sort of looks like, but I think Honda made a huge misstake there. I'd like to see a more slick looking roof, with a longer roof-line. If you are up to it, try to stretch the c-pillar so that it connects further down on the back fender. That will give the car a more slick look and I think it could look cool.

If we move over to execution I think it's great for the most part, but there are some toony areas. Unfortunantly I don't know exactly how to fix them. One of these areas is on the roof, where the highlight on the side of the C and A-pillar meets the darker color on top of the roof. One way to make that less toony, I reckon, would be to make the the line there a bit sharper. Use the pen-tool, draw sort of a horizonline between the dark and bright color and then just add a little brush on there. Either dark or bright, whatever you fancy ;)

Regarding the refs in the window, I think Klaus is right, but I don't think those refs are right... Never seen a photo where cloud refs bend that way, they sort of don't follow the windscreen. Should be straighter I think... I could be wrong though :) I have been wrong before... ;)

Otherwise just keep at it :) Gonna be awesome in any case.
Cheers!
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Awesome, what I can say))) I like all)) One question - you will do some lights on your composition or it be dark chop? :-d
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Ohh Emil, thanks alot! xD I’ve actualy worked on a new design of the roof, I realy don’t think the original roof fit to the new design. So next update tonight will have a new roof :) about the windscreen reflection, I looked at the orignial car and saw the cloud refs are almost vertical. So I’ve worked on that!

Thanks Naks :D I will go for a dark chop this time!

I realy appreciate you took time to comment my work!
Cheers,
New update with new roof lines and window reflection, I can't decide which one shall I go for?!

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First One!
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