Not bad. Style is pretty cool and the BMX rider is a nice touch 
Things to work on:
- Front window reflections need to be changed so that only the sky is reflecting
- Reflection of the BMX rider on the hood isn't positioned correctly. It should be a smaller reflection, and shouldn't extend so far up the hood (most of the ref should be in the bottom left part of the hood with a dark area just above the grille where the guy's body is reflected).
- Rear arch looks really weird to me. Considering that the arches have been widened, I think that you should position them further back on the body as it looks like you've put them exactly where they used to be (when in reality the wheel would appear further back from this angle as it sticks out more).
- Considering how sharp the car's shadow is, the BMX rider's shadow should be a lot sharper.
- I really don't like the rims. The thin spokes make them look too cheap and flimsy to me.
Overall quite nice so far though
Things to work on:
- Front window reflections need to be changed so that only the sky is reflecting
- Reflection of the BMX rider on the hood isn't positioned correctly. It should be a smaller reflection, and shouldn't extend so far up the hood (most of the ref should be in the bottom left part of the hood with a dark area just above the grille where the guy's body is reflected).
- Rear arch looks really weird to me. Considering that the arches have been widened, I think that you should position them further back on the body as it looks like you've put them exactly where they used to be (when in reality the wheel would appear further back from this angle as it sticks out more).
- Considering how sharp the car's shadow is, the BMX rider's shadow should be a lot sharper.
- I really don't like the rims. The thin spokes make them look too cheap and flimsy to me.
Overall quite nice so far though
puszka321 wrote:
please video 
MK211 wrote:
I really like the nos coming out of the rims
