Rims look great from a shadow highlight point of view, as well as design. The design fits really well with the rest of the car I think. My only issue with them are that they are a bit wobly sort of, they are not completly round. Might have happened during the brush or something like that. Could be fixed by going back using a circular path and adding that around, and filling the area.

Other then that just keep going, will turn out sweet, but sweeter with an actual bg! :P Hehe. I am just gonna keep mentioning that untill:
1. You do change it
2. Finnish with a truly amazing result :P

Cheers!
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Impressive stuff so far. Lovely bg environment
sn- wrote:
Alright, as example I take the front/rear arch
You have multiple colours and tones, which is a (very) good thing. But they dont blend smooth enough. Also, the arches dont look well shaped, it looks a bit wobbly. Thats because the different tones/colours dont blend the same into the side of the car. What you can do is to create a layer of the side of the car and make a new layer with the arch. But make the arches 'bigger' and then delete the part of the arch that you dont need with the eraser tool. The result will be that the whole arch blends better into the side of the car and all tones/colours blend the same.
Combine your brushing more with the pentool. Suggested that also to Nordic Man, he said it works better and make the brushing looks smoother indeed.

Hope you'll understand ;)

lol, that is the only way for me untill i get new tablet pen ;)
+1 and same with rims, they dont really count as clean ;)
whow stunning , my feeling is could find even better rims but , damnn this looks sick =O
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rich wrote:
whow stunning , my feeling is could find even better rims but , damnn this looks sick =O

Thanks mate .. ill try and find some :)
Algeroth wrote:
Rims look great from a shadow highlight point of view, as well as design. The design fits really well with the rest of the car I think. My only issue with them are that they are a bit wobly sort of, they are not completly round. Might have happened during the brush or something like that. Could be fixed by going back using a circular path and adding that around, and filling the area.

Other then that just keep going, will turn out sweet, but sweeter with an actual bg! :P Hehe. I am just gonna keep mentioning that untill:
1. You do change it
2. Finnish with a truly amazing result :P

Cheers!

Thanks mate ! haha im not gonna change my mind :P ill work on BG so maybe i can change your mind :P haha
MK211 wrote:
Impressive stuff so far. Lovely bg environment

Thanks mate :)
sn- wrote:
Alright, as example I take the front/rear arch
You have multiple colours and tones, which is a (very) good thing. But they dont blend smooth enough. Also, the arches dont look well shaped, it looks a bit wobbly. Thats because the different tones/colours dont blend the same into the side of the car. What you can do is to create a layer of the side of the car and make a new layer with the arch. But make the arches 'bigger' and then delete the part of the arch that you dont need with the eraser tool. The result will be that the whole arch blends better into the side of the car and all tones/colours blend the same.
Combine your brushing more with the pentool. Suggested that also to Nordic Man, he said it works better and make the brushing looks smoother indeed.

Hope you'll understand ;)

Ahh .. i understand now mate .. thank you for commenting .. i will try and do what you said :)
Chopperkid44 wrote:
wow one of your best so far! Truely getting closer and closer! Its fun to see the steps haha

keep it up dude!

thanks mate !
Zero wrote:
sweet update, i like the style of the rims, keep it up
from the wips so far this should be your best chop and as jack said pro worthy ;)

woo hoo ! thanks mate lol
jackdarton wrote:
AWESOME update. the rims looks epic man, really really nice work. add a few sunspots on the rims where the light would hit them. make them small and bright :D keep it up. follow svens advice too with smoothness. the smudge tool is your best friend.

okay mate ill try .. thanks a lot mate :)
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I think the rims are great, but just add some smaller, brighter and sharper highlights to them and it'll make them look a lot better (like jd said). The brushing of the car is really great. It fits into the background perfectly... hopefully you can make the bg as good as the car's looking!

Damn... I need a tablet :(
puszka321 wrote:
please video xD
MK211 wrote:
I really like the nos coming out of the rims
thanks a lot klaus . will sotr out rims and i will try my best with BG ;)
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Update .. Got fed up of it so i had a break :) but i think all i need to do now is BG and finish FB and Sideskirt .. anything else people ? :) please give comments as i need some encouragment :D
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Looks good, will be nice to see it when it's finnished :) Keep at it!

Cheers!
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thanks mate ... i see you didnt post a big comment ! so theres nothing wrong ? wooohooo ! hahah .. nice one mate
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