For my taste the car and the background is too dark and has too much contrast.
You can't really see everything any more.

And I guess the light has to be a bit more on the left of the picture.
hmm.. Ok, i catch it.
Workin' with an update
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I think your chop just took a backward step or 2 bro i'm sorry.

Color is oversaturated
Lighting seems alright.
too much contrast on the mesh and fmic piping.

I'd take it back or spend some intense time working on this verison
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Thx for your comment Chopperkid, it's absolutely right) Don't worry)
So...

Another update!!!
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- re-colored
- contrast balanced
- now with neon!
- reflections added


last update for today >_> better or worse?
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little update, just reloaded the picture and fxd some little bugs)
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UnL1M says: Biiiig thx)
Nicklas says: i will
Nicklas says: Lower the saturation of the green, because you can't see colors in the dark
UnL1M says: Tomorrow i won't remember this) can you post in thread :P
Nicklas says: left from our point of view
Nicklas says: Light cone needs to be moved a bit to the left

:D
Thx) Nick)
so i'll work with an update tomorrow)
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I think the best one is wip2. Keep working from that one and forget doing the night scene imo ;) you'll get a better result. I actually quite liked the bonnet scoop. Keep working on it and I'm sure you'll get it better in no time.
ok. So i'll work with an update of day version fow now)

thx for your comment)
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Two updates:
1) Night : some bug fixed, some reflections fixed, midnight color fixed
I think, that it's my final version of this green night beast)
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2) Day : interc. light remaked, color changed.
Don't know what else I can do with that...
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I'm workin' with another big work now) Sow can I be sure, that it's enough to be promoted? xD
If it isn't, next wip won't be soon >_>
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