Nice design!
The open door seems a little too white in the middle.
The wheel is very bright, but I don't know if your going to change the BG or not.
hi,
at this moment, thats looks too toony and squared...
but great potential for the continuation :-d :-d
GG
Thanks guys.
I urged to do better and to continue xD
I think you should carbon the front lip and centre section, bits that are gloss black anyways to give it a better effect. As for the front rim, I think you should change it as the quality ain't that good. Keep it up though, looking good so far.
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Thanks to the advice of BSC have experienced this .. and I must say that I like!
I leave you comment and please give me more tips on how to continue.
And if you have one, I say one! xD, wheel of good quality please post it.
Update :-d
http://img138.imageshack.us/img138/7195/wip3gtrbemdesign.jpg
carbon is made in the wrong way but i've just explained you how to do it :D
rest is fine mate. keep up..
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Well, I hope you don't be mad on me, if I talk a bit about the mistakes :)
First of all, You should add some refs on the side of lip, and add more brightness to refs on "carbonized" parts, because now they looks not realistic. Secondly, I strongly suggest, that you would add some blur on lip and other parts which you have brushed, because they looks angular.
Then, you could rebrush wheel(I guess I see now a bit brush on it), or find a better donor, because it looks like incerased.
I hope, that in next wip you'll use some of the advices :) :-d
Then the chop will be perfect, I think :)

EDIT: By the way, when you push "make selection", set radius to 0,3; With this method, there won't be any edgy places :)
Post edited July 02, 2010 at 12:02:04 AM by Vilius
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Thanks for comments and aid guys.
Soon a new update with many mistakes fixes :-d
Here's a small update.
Done a bit 'in a hurry, I do not know if I have corrected all the errors! :P
http://img820.imageshack.us/img820/2558/wip4gtrbemdesign.jpg
Yes, your carbone is too dark for a good realism :/
for the rest, chooses a style of rims and try to keep it :-d :-d

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