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ok guys, iv done some more work on this, iv tried to brush some small parts, well sorta brush, more like use the paint brush to fill in and create different colours for a cleaner effect. I know there is no reflections on the car at all atm but there will be (hopefully) Iv been working on the front half of the car mainly so Iv covered the rest up for now as I dont need to see it until I get the front right. Also am feeling a darish night seen for a background and have addded lights. I dunno if these are gunna work? Maybe iv messed the car up more or maybe I havent, but all I know is I learning a lot while doing this car over a longer time lol. Please comment and give me feedback, tips advice, ideas... PS: I know its still poor lol


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For me the side vents are losing perspective :-)

I agree on the side vent. Not bad so far. Needs a different set of wheels though

ok kwl, i will sort out side vents and find some nice wheels

ok iv decided upon a background (I think) iv changed the alloys and the vent. For the wheel I used pictures of alloy, tyres and brake pade. Maybe I should add some nice detailed bolts? (if I can LOL) and colour capps? Shadow still needs workin on all round and i not sure about the indercators atm, what do you people think?

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Rim isnt circle, also is too much blur everywhere. Badlook need shadow under it (on lights)
The side window is to sharpen.
Hmm I dont know what do you think, but I'd prefer start once again doing it. You need focus on doing it with accuracy. Try using brush but don't smudge it or smt like that cuz is too blur.
On the first time, try do one part really accuracy and finish it, then start doing next part of your job. Than you can do much better :-)
Try try and once again try :-) Everybody have the other style of brushing, and making a chops, you need to create your own style which is the best for you

Abime

ok cool, ill try sort these things. I may start again if it comes to it lol. I know what you mean about working on one part accuratly at a time, I should have done this from the beggining lol. cheers