NOD wrote:
great work
Thanks man. :D
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This is the correct section, as you're still novice. Just follow your rank and post in the section that's the same as the rank.

As for your work, interesting idea, I like the black and yellow combination and the overall look of it. And of course, just do whatever comes to mind as far as ideas go, keep the creativity flowing ^^

Things that are wrong:
-Overfenders/wide body kit could have been blended with the body better. The black outline is too strong and too dark. On te front, you're missing an ouline where the splitter/spoiler meets the arch. The shadow behind the front wheel is too strong and the fender could've been done better. The bottom part of the front right overfender, above the spoiler, needs to be darker to match the way the sun drops. Front left is missing a small white highlight, because this way it looks like it's flat with the bumper. On the rear, you need a small shadow on the side skirt and there should be a small kink just after the s and above the lowest bolt.

-Rear wing is not bad, but the wing stays are meh. They look too thin. Copy the sing stays and move them a bit to the left or right and fill in the space between them. Don't forget to add a small highlight as well.

-The cage is questionable.It seems like it's missing the bar that connects the A pillars. And you're missing the back half of the cage.

-The mishimoto oil cooler is good, but the intercooler pipe needs some more shadow. Select the pipe and use a big soft brush at a low opacity and pass over the left part of the pipe, nexr to the edge of the bumper vent.

-The sticker on the top of the windshiled is placed badly. Use the custom warp tool to match it to the curve of the windshiels. Just follow the top edge of it. And then use the perspective or distort tool to match it to the perspective of the windshield.

-Not sure what those things behind the seats are honestly.

Sorry for the long read, hopefully it helps :P
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Thanks, I'll be watching the tips, I'm here to improve myself, and it's always a good constructive criticism.

As for the back of the seats at the time I thought it would be cool hahaha. :D
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Looks nice but i must to say that the rear wheel is off.
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Thank you, man, I'll dedicate myself, to be more detail oriented. So I do not let those mistakes pass. :D
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Awesome chop :-d
Thank you, man! :mrteeth:
I'm glad you like it!
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