Ford Iosis X Monorail [UPDATE]

Here´s my chop for the competition.

It´s the first time I brushed most of it (80%).

I think you´ll see what I´ve changed.

Maybe you find mistakes I didn´t see so I can correct them before handing it in for the competition.

Original:
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http://img33.imageshack.us/i/originalklein.jpg/

Orginal background:
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http://img33.imageshack.us/i/colamonorail.jpg/

Fake:
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http://img42.imageshack.us/i/fake1024.jpg/
Update: Added damage, rust and reddish colour
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Post edited October 04, 2009 at 06:42:30 PM by Closed 24-7
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Can't see pics , mate
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I added links to imageshack.
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Nice idea.

Never seen a car chopped into a monorail car before and the result is really nice. The brushing is good quality and the colour is a good colour.

Keep up the good work.
Thx, m8.
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Hey, I like the idea. Quite original.
Firstly, I'd say the shinyness of the car doesn't fit the scene. It looks like quite a desolate future city, a bit like Gotham City form the Batman series. I think the car should be grunged up a bit for it to fit the scene better.
Also, the car looks as though it's floating above the rail, it doesn't seem as though it's connected like the train in the original. I'd just say lower it over the rail a bit more so it looks like it's connected.
Apart form that, the wheel covers are really well executed.
And you've covered up where the old train used to be very well.
Overall, congratulations, great chop.
Thanks.
I didn´t want it to be connected to the rail, it should be a megnetic monorail.
Funny that you mentioned Gotham, that was the first thing I was looking for, but I didn´t find pics from Batman.
I think you´re right with the shinyness. Maybe I will try some dirt, but I guess that will be difficult.
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Closed 24-7 wrote:
Thanks.
I didn´t want it to be connected to the rail, it should be a megnetic monorail.
Funny that you mentioned Gotham, that was the first thing I was looking for, but I didn´t find pics from Batman.
I think you´re right with the shinyness. Maybe I will try some dirt, but I guess that will be difficult.

The magnetic idea makes sense now.
And I agree, the dirt will be incredibly hard, I don't blame you if you don't do it.
Nice work though
Good idea but the background is a bad resolution ...
Naples is my city....
Cool idea, but yeah you still need to make it look like it belongs in that environment better. Have a look at the original monorail in the pic as that'll give you the best idea what i mean.
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