Schoolproject - Reflection of third / Answering questions

Hey community,

you remember my school art project I guess, if not please check the link:

http://www.autemo.com/forums/?t=2297

To every practical work you have to write some pages about it and also
interpretate the project etc. For me it would be nice to get comments on
the car itself, not only about the technical thing. This would be a nice add,
so I could make a subtopic called "reflection of third" or something.

Perhaps you could answer (more or less in detail, if you can) some questions.

Question 1: Can you characterize the car itself? Which special places of the body would
you point out?


Question 2: What do you really like of this car? What isnt your taste?

Question 3: Is there any place of the car you would have designed otherwise, or added something?

Question 4: Can you imagine to buy this car when it will come out? And why (not)?

Question 5: Is the advertisement-book attractive for the reader? Does it represent the car in a good way?
( http://www.sfdsupreme.de.vu )


If there are any other points which come in your mind, you also can tell them...

It would be nice to have some comments on this one quickly. And thanks so far

Best regards,
Basti
Post edited January 25, 2010 at 11:29:36 PM by sfdesignz
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Question 1: Can you characterize the car itself? Which special places of the body would
you point out?

I really like the rear part of the car. Effective and cool design, and the little smooth spoiler is a nice add too.

Question 2: What do you really like of this car? What isnt your taste?
Again, I'm a big fan of the rear part. Also, the exhausts really add a racer look to it, nice detail!

Question 3: Is there any place of the car you would have designed otherwise, or added something?
Yeah, definitely. Hardly any car is perfect, so there is a couple of things that I'd like to edit: The arches are a bit tuning styleish, and I would have chosen to lower the roof a bit

Question 4: Can you imagine to buy this car when it will come out? And why (not)?
Probably, yeah. Design-wise it's a sweet ride, and you can also get a pretty neat engine too

Question 5: Is the advertisement-book attractive for the reader? Does it represent the car in a good way?
Yeah it does. The layout is simple, but yet very effective. The colour scheme is good + it delivers the message nicely.
Thank you very much, Nicklas
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Question 1: Can you characterize the car itself? Which special places of the body would
you point out?

Very clean lines and appealing design on the rear especially. The rear wide flares seem too sharp edge in towards the front end. I like the design a lot!

Question 2: What do you really like of this car? What isnt your taste?

I really like the proportions and size! I do not like the wide side skirt flares and the front bumper vents seem a tad wide. Looks like a pug dog

Question 3: Is there any place of the car you would have designed otherwise, or added something?

A very small wing possibly and mirrors as it lacks them

Question 4: Can you imagine to buy this car when it will come out? And why (not)?

If it comes with a good tranny package and appealing colors most likely


Question 5: Is the advertisement-book attractive for the reader? Does it represent the car in a good way?

Aside from the language barrier (i speak english) It looks very attractive and followable!
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Thank you very much, I really aprecciate that. You were a good help, buddy. And good luck in the WTB this year, I will follow that.
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Question 1: Can you characterize the car itself? Which special places of the body would
you point out?

The car has a nice sportiness to it but still with subtle traits that make it appealing to the general public. The choices of colors is smart, but feels more conceptcar then production car due to the black rims. These aspects make the car feel youthful, and therefore I think the avarage customer would be a younger person. The front of a car usually characterizes the car. On yours the front seems a bit stolen from the EVO unfortunantly with the black pieces in the centre. The piece I instead look at is the sideskirt connected to the back fender which is quite unique.

Question 2: What do you really like of this car? What isnt your taste?
I like your choice of contrast with the red and black colors. The black rims looks awesome, but as mentioned make the car look a bit more of a concept car then a production car. The best piece of the body is the lower piece of the back bumper though. Really cool and agressive, but maybe a bit to low.
I am not too fond of the sideskirt however. The line up towards the back wheelarchextension just brakes the flow of the car.

Question 3: Is there any place of the car you would have designed otherwise, or added something?
Once again I'll mention the sideskirt. I would have removed the back part of it connecting to the wheelarchextension. I would also have changed the shape of the side window so that it hadn't followed the c-pillar so far. Lastly I had tried to have made the front stick out more, as in, made it more unique.

Question 4: Can you imagine to buy this car when it will come out? And why (not)?
I would not buy the car because I don't like the general design of it. I like sport coupe's but this just doesn't appeal to me. For me it's the overall design, how it doesn't seem to fit together. The lines on the car just don't seem to fit together.

Question 5: Is the advertisement-book attractive for the reader? Does it represent the car in a good way? ( http://www.sfdsupreme.de.vu )
I really liked the booklet. Feels genuine and has a nice realistic feel to it. The best pages 1,2 and 17. Really nice and look very nice and appeals to me as a customer. The overall layout, with the little details and general layout is really nice.


Hope this helps you! :)

Cheers!
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Hi mate, I don't have time right now to answer the questionnaire but I will do this tonight or tomorrow as soon as can ;)
Thank you Algeroth, really helps me...Some points of you will perhaps be mentioned in the written part of my project. Here you can see how the project is going to be presented.

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Post edited January 29, 2010 at 05:22:29 AM by sfdesignz
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^^^^ Wow, looking great.
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Thanks dude, I also like the presentation...I had to finish the practical work, because tomorrow is deadline and I had to write my theoretical work of this project...it also includes about 20 pages, like the advertisement book...here you can see an animation of the theoretical part,
its already printed and bounded.

Animation:
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