Mazda 3 Japanese Bitch *GEISHA* VVTdesign

Hi there!
Here is my new work,Mazda 3 for an contest on czech VT forum vt.tuned-cars.cz :)
BodyKit-100% brush
Lowered
New rims
Lights
Black hood
and more things... :)
Tuned:
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Original:
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Looks good!.
However the Front bumper, and some parts of the sideskirt and rearbumper is quite Toony to be honest.
Along with some poor selections on the Frontbumper. For example The Right sidevent (the one next to the Big middle vent) has a bad flow with the "innergoing" part (the part thats inside the bumper) Also there might be too much Grillemesh would look quite more cool if you had put, Lets say an intercooler with pipes on the vents next to the big Vent! imo.

If we go over to the roof it is tbh Very toony aswell, also the Frontwindow Border is toony.
However i believe this could be fixed quite easily by just selecting the light area (the bright red that is) And making a new layer and taking a brush at say 100px (depending on your Image size) Then take the eyedropper tool and picking a bright blue colour from the sky, and just smoothly make about half the roof a bit brighter (should get brighter the closer the Darkpart you get.
A tip; if the bg would have been brighter and you are going to do this, you might want to make another layer "ontop of the one we just made" and taking a 30 - 45px White Brush and just adding a fine line ;) It will look loads better i believe.

Now if we go over to your brushing, i think you can see for yourself it doesn't look quite Correct. If you look at the Colour of the body then the colour of the Bodykit you have brushed you'll see that It has a more "pink" colour also the black colour looks the sameway. although almost everyone but the Eliteextremeultramofochoppers have somewhat of a problem with this and its really not that big of a deal, unless its like a red car then having "pig pink" bodykit. That would just look wrong.
The wheels look good! Not so off as i can see, Love the camber <3 hah :-d

The bg change looks great although the shadow coulda been alot better!
I know this might sound a bit harsh but this is what you need to hear to get better! and i tried to give you as much tips/tricks as possible, now bare in mind what i've said. And make an even better chop!
But overall the chop is acctually quite good, you have compiled a nice Style!
Good work ! now keep it up.! xD
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Ou,thanks for your looong comment :)
firstly, epic comment Nibs, they're the type we need and it's awesome to see it catching on. People who offer this type of constructive criticism will be rewarded in the future ;)

He said it all for me although i gotta say i love the style going on here. It's also good to see you kept the original colour. Nice work, but it has a few things you could work on for your next chop, nothing TOO major but they're clear nontheless. Keep it up, i'm looking forward to seeing more chops from you :)
Hello.
Nibs, nice post u rock :)

viktuvt, its a good chop, the rims are great and i like the skirt. The brushing work is pretty good. But I think you made the red shadow on the roof too dark. It doesn't really need that in my opinion. Keep up the good work
Thanks mates :)
nibs rules :)
i think its a very nice chop
major thing i think is make sure you colormatch the colors when adding stuff :-d
also try to incorporate a lip kit wih the cars design so it fits better , the shape is very unique but it kinda doiesnt seem to fit all that good

but i think you could be inter with this chop :-d
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thanks mate :)
cool chop!
I think everything has already been poined out.
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nice chop mate :)
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